you need to read Cathedral by Raymond carver to rewrite this essay. this essay’s intro are good, but the body paragraph need more describe and do same research and cite using MAL style. also need to add a paragraph about opposition. the story about the teacher is too long. please simplify the story.
the outline:
Intro
Pro 1
Pro 2
Oppo 1
Refutation paragraph(using the story)
Conclusion
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